Saturday 27 October 2012

Sunday spanklet - It could only be


Spanklet  (n.) - definition - a very short story where an individual is spanked or caned.
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The schoolboy, in his mind, was bent tightly at the waist
As the cane made its inexorably descent
Onto the small target of his bottom, which quivered
But did not flinch or move.

The timorous smack on the bare bottom of the teenage girl
Who lay beside him in the  bedroom  of a house, whose parent owners
Were away on holiday, leaving their daughter to the responsibilities
Of adulthood for the first time, and who had  chosen sex over studies..

That smack was returned quickly and when, again, he chose not to  move
She delivered another, until he climbed over her lap and seemed  to invite
A great many more single-minded slaps, on his bare cheeks.

The red-lipped woman in Amsterdam with whom he had faied to get
An erection, asked him for the money,  but then relented a little
And inquired about his fantasies, before taking the whip,
Down from the hook on the wall and leaving a memory of pleasure in thin red lines.

The young woman, who became his wife , took all these memories
And burnished them into molten gold which secures him in a chain.




2 comments:

  1. That was very good - somewhere between poetry and prose, I would say. Whatever you care to call it, it was a marvellous piece - thanks again for all the lovely stuff you bring us, and, as ever, my respectful regards to your Lady.

    hh

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  2. Thank you HH it is good to have you as a reader.

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